bellaco69

Abre la batalla Smoka
Plazo hasta el 11 de nov.
Suerte para ambos

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KingRanks was here! bellaco.. Guatauba Life! ya sabes..

Smoka

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DON-K

aviste mis ojos..vive un pajaro en ti..en tu sangre corre una flor..tu corazon es un violin
toke tus notas...compuse melodias...mis partituras nadaban en tu del-fin
sin tu "DO" ni tu "FA"..me encontre tu negra y sin ser racista me dio un solo tiempo
mis dedos..meniandose entre arpegios..corrian entre pentagramas dandote ejemplo
no deno-minas lo puro..explota tu blanca en dos pasos sin necesidad de improvisar
com-pruebo textutas..en 4 times salen redondas..no caben en tu estrecho pensar
in-verso mi "u" en "n" concluciones..visto tu lapiz de sinfonia..duerme al escribir funcional
sin ser ladron..rapte tus dedos..buscas luz en mi clave de sol..bienvenido a mi musical

________AMEN________

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bellaco69

buena por partes de ambos
Smoka estuvo bien con sus ideas, fue agrasivo, directo
3-5-7 me gustaron.
Don-k estuvo regular, te fuiste mucho a lo musical.
Las ultimas rimas fueron muy básicas.
la 2 me gustó

Mi voto es para Smoka

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KingRanks was here! bellaco.. Guatauba Life! ya sabes..

pancho_calderon

buena guerra esta me gusto bastante pero me voy x el q kizo matar a su rival de una y ps la letra de don-k dio muchas vueltas y no fue directo al grano ahi mi voto










smoka

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bakho

smoka, no hay mas
ke cierren esto

PzIcolosick

:dedobien: ME GUSTO BASTANTE ESA METAPHORA EN MUSICA DE CORA...

UFFF AL LEERLO... TA CAB.RONA...

pero en batalla nose si te silva tanto...pero pa leerlo en balas lokas..

ta de HPT....

cuideseme!:coolrock:

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bellaco69

Ganador smoka

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KingRanks was here! bellaco.. Guatauba Life! ya sabes..